i love the mood of these! i love that you seem shy and thoughtful, and the location is awesome. i miss that place. =)
i want to make twoooo suggestions, though (haha, i have such a big mouth. you can shut me up if you'd rather not be critiqued. i know these are just for you, but i can't help myself)
one - dramatic lighting can add sooo much to photos. i won't shoot anything outside unless it's overcast, sunrise, or right before sunset. it's hard to get cool lighting effects if the sun is directly overhead, so i just don't fool with it anymore.
two - it seems like in a lot of photos your composition is really similar -- with the subject in the middle on the right 3rd of the image. which is totally fine (i'm a left 3rd girl myself when i'm not paying attention) but i'd like to see some fun experimental angles.
i need to shoot more. this is actually really inspirational. sorry if you didn't want feedback, but i really would like to see more of your self portrait series!!
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i feel like this set should be put to music.
I'm not sure why. :) But I think it's a good thing. Maybe it's evoking emotion.
i love the mood of these! i love that you seem shy and thoughtful, and the location is awesome. i miss that place. =)
i want to make twoooo suggestions, though (haha, i have such a big mouth. you can shut me up if you'd rather not be critiqued. i know these are just for you, but i can't help myself)
one - dramatic lighting can add sooo much to photos. i won't shoot anything outside unless it's overcast, sunrise, or right before sunset. it's hard to get cool lighting effects if the sun is directly overhead, so i just don't fool with it anymore.
two - it seems like in a lot of photos your composition is really similar -- with the subject in the middle on the right 3rd of the image. which is totally fine (i'm a left 3rd girl myself when i'm not paying attention) but i'd like to see some fun experimental angles.
i need to shoot more. this is actually really inspirational. sorry if you didn't want feedback, but i really would like to see more of your self portrait series!!
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